diff --git a/1_0_Introducing_Bitcoin.md b/1_0_Introducing_Bitcoin.md index 101fb6b..f5caf5b 100644 --- a/1_0_Introducing_Bitcoin.md +++ b/1_0_Introducing_Bitcoin.md @@ -89,15 +89,15 @@ One way to think of blockchain is: _a linked series of blocks of non-changeable ## Is Blockchain Right for Me? -Blockchain has becomea popular buzz-word, but it's not a magic bullet for all technical problems. With that said, blockchains do have some very specific situations where it's a superior technology. +If you want to transact Bitcoins, then obviously Bitcoin is right for you. However, more widely, Blockchain has becomea popular buzz-word, and it's not a magic bullet for all technical problems. With that said, blockchains do have some very specific situations where it's a superior technology. Blockchains probably _will_ be helpful if: * Users don't trust each other. * Or: Users are across various borders. * Users don't trust central authorities. - * And: Users want to control their own destinies. - * And: Users want transparent technology. + * And: Users want to control their own destinies. + * Users want transparent technology. * Users want to share something. * And: Users want what's shared to be permanently recorded. * Users want fast transaction finality.